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English

Jin, Liam

  • Use a wider variety of color that contrast or complement one another

  • Implement visuals that support and align with texts

  • Apply more bullets points to reduce paragraph size

  • Include introduction as well as conclusion to important paragraphs

  • Give more examples for user to easily comprehend and build relations with texts

  • Provide citation to works(articles)

Mathematics

Fong, Antonia

  • Improve images relevancy through writing articles revolving around images or use images relevant to articles.

  • Prioritize formal wording through avoiding the usages of pronoun and pauses within articles, furthermore, avoid wordiness while incorporating more fancy terms to emphasize important text.

  • Incorporating bullet points to reduce paragraphs size.

  • Place images to the left side or below text to reduce distraction as right-left alignment take away reader’s attention from each paragraph.

  • Incorporate a stronger thesis statement to emphasize your argument.

  • Include citations and resources.

Biology

Wang, Dora

  • Provide more free spaces to fix the clutter issues. It can help emphasizes each paragraph’s points.

  • Incorporate thesis statement within introduction paragraph to help guide user to each pages topic.

  • Add a conclusion paragraph to help summarize important details in each pages to highlight key take-away.

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